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I would have prefered to have seen a little more of the bottom on the left and without that sharp angle of the wrist - could have been done by moving her elbow slightly to the right.
Also I think it would have been more powerful if the both faces had been hidden and the face turn towards the other body.
Then I would have tried to lower the left arm on the rhs of the picture so that we could have seem nore of the line of the upper bottom and thigh.
But apart from this tweaking which is purely my personal preference - I like this for its raw audacity and lovely form.
I might have been tempte to title it "heart to heart" or "stuck on you" because the unusual feature for me is that the breasts are pressed together so centrally.
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